Part 2 and other things...

Old stuff

The original story was made in 9 days for a game jam. The writing was horrible as such the original content has been re-written entirely.

New stuff

The first version ended abruptly in a way I always felt was a shameful cope out.

A second and final chapter has been added, 10k words on top of the existing 9k.

Engine change

This new version does not use Twine nor SugarCube, it is a simple webpage instead. As a dev it is more comfortable and reduces the amount of unnecessary code.

Minor things

A typo-spotting system has been introduced.

Presentation has been improved slightly.

Fixed existing bugs, added brand new ones — to keep it fresh you know.