A 500 words game made for Neo-Twiny jam 2024.

Controls : Click anywhere or press any key to proceed.

Fonts used under Open Font License:

  • Yatra One by Catherine Leigh Schmidt
  • PT Serif by Paratype
StatusReleased
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 5.0 out of 5 stars
(7 total ratings)
AuthorMaliface
GenreInteractive Fiction
Made withTwine
TagsBoring, Twine
Average sessionA few minutes
LanguagesEnglish, French
InputsKeyboard, Mouse, Touchscreen

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(+1)

I want to give this story my love but I don’t know how. Beautifully written and visually enchanting. Amazing work! I look forward to seeing more

Thank you, your love has been received and greatly appreciated ♡

(+1)

;-; this was so good

Thank you ♡

(3 edits) (+1)

Beautiful! Also haunting, sweet, heartbreaking, and touching. Not to mention the technical quality, which is huge, as always.

A few small typos I noticed along the way:

  • “wrapper[ed] in white linen”

  • “at last we have reached the plateau[x]” (unless it’s meant to be plural)

  • “countless spec[k]s of light”

Thank you for the compliments and  typo hunt ♡

"plateaux" is meant to be plural but I assume "plateaus" sounds more natural in this case, I was unsure about it...

(+1)

I really liked the use of colors and the symbols of celestial bodies you use. The writing is brief but very evocative.

Thank you ♡

(+2)

It's always cool to see what talented people can create in Twine. I really liked the day-night cycle to represent the journey, and the scene with the star admittedly startled the hell out of me until I saw the ending. Bittersweet but gorgeously written :')

Thank you ♡

Writing isn't my strong suit so I'll use every presentation trick in the book :p